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Forever Young

you held my heart close
wishing you had been my first
my first everything

yet time passes quickly by
unnoticed we waste to old

touched deeply inside
wonder I survived so long
without sincere love

now I betrothed without you
my impatience fooled me

crying one more chance
to be youthful as your wife
mother of our child

to give life's gifts united
a child of our legacy

my soul screams for more
yet knows it shall never be
as our tears mingle

another plan is intact
but our love shall still survive

though much older now
this sweet ardor lives in clouds
of white soft cotton

cuddling closely knowing
love never grows old for us



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  • dragontuba
    July 5, 2008
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    thank you ..it touched my heart....

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