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My Own Fool

Missing image
Did you fool them?

looking in this mirror
seeing betrayal
you are irresponsibly

Those eyes such innocents?

mistakes made with a smile
who looks beyond flaws
can't do it

Would they run?

If shown the grim reality
behind, eyes wicked way
strains to find good

What was thought acceptable?

Years of sexual wrongness
should have said no

Pictures taken in weakness
should have said no

Drug use escapism
should have said no

Taking the mask off now
seeing who was in the reflection
finding it's ME...
mask off

Regrets made, people looking
stop the staring
I am no different than most
as i cry

Only defense I have is
bravely taking off the facade
here i am
for all to examine

My regrets?
Yes ,now everyone knows
who i was

No more song and dance
your power is lost
over me!





Author notes

I have layed it all out in the open, now no one not even myself can hurt me!
Thank you Tim, for not running but crying with me.

I based this on my mistakes in my life. I take responcibity for them!

Also based on "Evanescence - Everybody´s Fool"
because i was...

Evanescence - Everybody´s Fool

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  • Such a powerful and beautiful write... Absolutely amazing. Keep up the good work and good luck in the contest =]

  • Xianaria gold member
    June 30

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    beloved~

    as i said many times, especially when you opened up to me, i'm not going anywhere. you are the bride of my soul, by your side is where i belong.

    you are correct, NO ONE has any power over you. if the only thing someone can do is try to embarrass you because of choices you've made, your confession takes away the only leg they can stand on. what's more, you're a New Creation and God has already forgiven you, so there is no power in the shadows anyway.

    i'm proud of you, my love

    i love you~
    tim