The spirit angel that walks beside you
with it spirit loneliness
Loneliness is more than a feeling
more than a thought, when all
the world is swirling,
The angel loneliness spreads its wings
and covers your heart as well as your
smile that wants to get out
Inward bound and out worldly unsound
the angel loneliness seems to always
come around
The blanket of its wings smothers your
heart,soul and even your heart as you
think why did angel loneliness choose
me from my life it seems from the start
Sadness is it best, best friend I am
so alone and loneliness i hate and that
I can not pretend
Prozac helps but not all the time, as
the angel loneliness finds its unkindly
way
Isolation is lionesses are best known
friend for that I can contend.
A contest entry
- Lonely by walkinthereign.
450 points, ended July 16, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please comment on my poetry-lion airs
Comments
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Lions Roar with Pride
well done on the emotional deepened sadness that loneliness can bring to the spirit and yet be enveloped with hope from isolation many blessings always xxx
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE
This is so inventive, and describes and defines the feeling of loneliness quite well. It grabs the reader and makes us identify with your words and emotions. Well done.
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE
What a read this one is! I did spot a few typos, but they do not distract from your meaning at all! This is great! I wonder how many can relate to this? I know I know it well.
Congrats on the HM!
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