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I do not write about people,
I can never remember which direction their ears do bend.
All I'm left is hopeful wantings and flesh on flesh
kisses to cheeks or characteristic massages of scalp and fingers.
Celestial bodies carry no flame to the teeth of a lover
nor the curves of lips threaded with invisible string
pulling a left corner one-quarter of an inch
above the other.

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  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Oh wow, the imagery in this very well done. The flow of it works very well and it's generally great.
    But it's quite sad at the same time too

    Anyways, well written
    Keep up the good work ^^
    Claire x