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[ Your foes are my foes, ]

Your foes are my foes,
I will fight them to my dying breath,
Without thanks, reward or sadness,
I will draw a line in the sand,
And stand firm before you,
Weathering every assualt,
For you are part of my circle,
Linked to my being,

If by chance I am too late,
Be sure that my vengence is true,
It will strike hard for the heart,
And our enemies will fall,
Like rotten fruit upon the ground,
Though I failed to protect,
I will raise hell to make ammends,
And guide you safely home,

If it is in my power,
I will gladly shoulder your woes,
And consume them within myself,
Any time you need it,
My smile will be ready at call,
To shine a little light,
To save you from misery's hole,
Though I be not great and powerful,
My protectiveness is fierce,
And will wither all who cross it,
My sword is always ready,
And loyalty is my blood.

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To all my friends near and far, my family and my other half.....

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  • azlyn gold member
    July 4

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    Such a noble friend!

    How blessed to be a part of such a ring of protection! I am this way as well...mess with mine...messing with me! Loved this so very much!!!

    Blessed be~
    Sue

  • This is a good write indeed

    Yes we stand proud for what we believe in and will fight to help anyone find the truth . Keep up the good work

  • This is such a prominent piece of strength and friendship. Very well spoken lines; you allow your reader the essence of your own grace - and to see the depths of your conviction. Great write!!

  • Great piece..... Each line was truly heartfelt and really spoke to me... wonderful dedication showing your great loyalty and what an amazing friend you are... And it is something you never cease to prove within your words and gestures... Excellent write...