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I Love You Too Much To Help You Die

Let your shattered fragments
hid beneath fullmoons gaze
sleep well under nights warm embrace
ｙour pain like clouds will soon pass by
for I shall be the light filling your evening sky

In some of your odd hours
I shall be your meaning of existence
wiping your emotional scars
the sunlight to your darkness
to help you bloom

I shall make my heart split in two
give you the half to make you whole
I shall be the shimmering moonbeams
breathing your bitterness
giving rays to branches of your solemn sky

Let me be the breath to your heart
the air where you shall rise
let me be the gentle breeze
helping you climb up the flowered sky
the chalice to drink your sun once again
reviving your deeming soul





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2. Something comforting ( like comforting someone who is far away and you miss them terribly )

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  • Shannanagan
    July 28
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    nice write, kudos to this silver

  • daviscth gold member
    July 14

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    I can see why this won a cup. The imagery is wonderful. Thanks so much for posting in my contest.


  • Melissa Burns
    July 1
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    Thank you for entering my contest

  • Alasar Minoko
    June 28

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    I like it. It is enchanting beyond belief. I am glad to hear such words in a poem. I know people I wish I could heal like that.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 28

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    Thank you so much for the wonderful words of inspiration...I would gladly give him all my heart if that would save him...best to you...blessings!
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