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Second Chance

I breath deep,
Needle breaking my skin,
Feel nervous and excited,
As I fall into my trip again.

Floating above my body,
Looking at my arm,
Needle sticking out,
What's happening to me?

Why am I not able to think?

What went wrong?

Why are these people screaming my name?

There to the side,
What is that person doing?

My body jolts,
I breath in,
Look around the room,
People sitting there,

I feel a smack on my cheek,
"Do not do that to me."
I put my hand over my eyes.

Yet,

I am,

Alive.

Author notes

I am sorry if it seems a bit jagged, the line reminded me of a friend. sidenote edited the last line in stanza to make it read a little differently

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  • Alasar Minoko
    June 28, 2008
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    Sorry I hope it helped out a bit. I am glad I have been graced thus far not to lose anybody to addiction. Have been pretty close though. I hope all the poems in your contest helps you find what you are looking for.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    June 28, 2008

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    ouch! I* have been there done that with him,,,,yet not exactly the same way, but I felt every word to my heart aqnd it was full of sorrow...thank you for the heartfelt write...well done in emotions...