Stumbling
Through
Time's fog;
Unraveling...
Author notes
The rules are:
-No more than 5 words
-In your Authors Note's put what those feelings are about
Feels like I'm walking without noticing whats going on around me. My life is passing me by and I can't seem to stop it...
A contest entry
- Tell me how you feel in Five words or Less by luna-midnight.
555 points, ended June 28, 2008, 80 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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ohhh this is brilliant - well done ^.^
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This has a slow creeping panic feel to it... as if how you had been living your life now no longer works. With life and time's increasing complexity I've found my days need structure or it all goes to nothing.
Congratulations on the HM.
Marlene
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ooohhhh, nicely put and thanks so much im sure we all know that feeling, like a blinffold throughout our life, its icky, i hope you will find your way and see it as way take care
thanks for entering and take care
stephanie
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What I like about this poem is that when I read it without reading what the poem is actually about I could already feel strongly what the poem was about. You didnt have to share because those five words were expression enough. I'm so amazed that you could write a comprehendable poem in five freaking words! That's just...well it's just awesome! And I'm so jealous of you having that ability. Well done and good luck in the contest, this is a very enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing.
-Sasha
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