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Brendan

The way you make my heart flutter
Is just amazing
An the way you make me feel
My hearts racing

I cant wait to talk to you
Because I love to hear what you say
I cant wait to dream about you
Because you make me fly away

Youre always there with open arms
Youre always there to comfort me
You always keep me out of harm
Your just so damn amazing!!

If I never met you
Where would I be??
If I never met you
Would there be a me??

I just want you to know
Im always gonna love you
Im always gonna be here
To always help you through

Watcha think dudes

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  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    July 1, 2008
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    AWESOME!!!

    First I have a suggestion to fix your "Youre" to you're. Other than that this a great poem to show that you really to care about this person named Brendan. Just becareful with your heart my dear, please protect it. ~~Mom~~ ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~