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[Frustration and Hate]

Enraged
Enthralled
Pissed off
Ticked off
Growling
Pouting
"Leave me alone!"
Stop mocking me stupid clone
You act like a mirror
Try acting like a man!
Following my foot steps,
FIND YOUR OWN PLAN!
Be your own person
Find your own game
Get your own fun
Not every one is to blame!
I'm not in the mood
Get the fuck out!
You're always so rude
and you wonder why I shout.
Stop coming to me with all your shit
I'm sorry I'm not your therapist
I'm not here for your benefit!
Now go on and go cut your stupid wrist
I don't care.
You're actions are up to you
stop blaming others for your affair
it's not like I never knew!
Go on your own way
stop trying to be like me
Do not disobey
stop trying to disagree!
I'm bad
I'm stupid
I'm mad
and I act like a kid!
I have a temper
and you want to keep it that way
You know what... just go
I can't stand you, your so gay!
Always rising my blood pressure
I tell you to quit
Every day my wounds get fresher
Just because of all your shit.
I lost my heart
I lost my name
This was all your work of art
I'm now just a memory sitting on your desk in a little frame
Keep walking
don't look back
In this f'ed up world,
turn around and here comes our attack!
You lost our trust
keep up the pace
pulled to us by lust
to the world your a disgrace!
You gained our hate
you lost your love
run away this is your fate
talk to me and I'll send you up above
This love and hate is torching our souls
We come to you with this knife made of tears
fight back, and your heart will have holes
We are tired of you using and hurting us for all these years...

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  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 6, 2008

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    Loads of emotions, more emotions in this one poem... than in any of my one poems. Man, very nicely written, maybe the flow was off, but I don't care haha Great job. Deffinitly made me feel something. Keep on writing.


    • VampyEyes
      July 8, 2008
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      thank you ha I only write now days when I'm in one of my fits. I try not to take it out on other people... anger management lol. Doctors taught me that.


  • Critical Jive
    July 2, 2008
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    Yes let me feed!
    Ah power...
    Nice poem, lots of emotion!~ XD

    • VampyEyes
      July 2, 2008
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      thanks haha I was REALLY pissed at my mom and Drew ''


  • Raining
    July 1, 2008

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    its ok jen, i feel the same sometimes my mom can really get on my nerves but its good you vented your anger I miss ya!

    <3 Chelsea


    • VampyEyes
      July 2, 2008
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      yeah I didnt want to yell, I knew writing a poem would help. I LOVE YOU OMG I MISS U SO MUCH! x_x

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