She warned me that
She wasn’t very good at CPR
but she sure knew how
to take my breath away
Author notes
Prompt: You are my air.
A contest entry
- Quickie-PIF-20x20words by Cannonsfire.
1800 points, ended June 28, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Lol What love you dreaming again? It was a pleasure to read your short and sweet poem. It was a pleasure.
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Sounds like a fun adventure!
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Memorable!
Sounds like something My Uncle Dink might say. He's a funny guy.,with a quick wit. Poetry is wit put to prose.
Jennifer
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pretty funny play with the prompt complete with damp tangled sheets.
Marlene -
... I had visions of this poem by the title and I was glad to find that you had shared it tastefully! Nice Quickie! joy
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lol
C
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Awww. this was just so cute!! I loved the flow and the image was just so sweet!!! You did a wonderful job!!! Best of luck!!
Angel
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im tired, im sorry forgot these little buggers, lol.
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thats cutsey, awwwwww, hehehehe, you made me smile 
thanks, and tak ecare and good luck
stephanie
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