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Memories of the Sun

Midday reminiscing,
in cool breezes that,
smelled like honeysuckle.
Laughter became our conversationalist,
as we relished chilled grass under bare feet.

My tears ran away from me,
because it was the last Sunday,
before it rained again,
and the sun shown magnificently.

Somber goodbyes through smeared smiles,
restraining sadness threatening to overcome,
when the voice of sweet words,
meets the feel of gentle touches,
in bittersweet partings.

When birds sing their final song of the evening,
and night sweeps across,
like a hidden wind in the morning,
my longing for your sun, comes all to soon.

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  • MisJudged
    June 29, 2008
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    Wow, this poem is extraordinary.