Your memory remains, painfully unerased
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My best friend of 16 years is dead and i cant let go....
A contest entry
- Tell me how you feel in Five words or Less by luna-midnight.
555 points, ended June 28, 2008, 80 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Those were some great words. I'm sorry about your friend. It is really hard to get over a loved one. All you can do is take it one day at a time. Congratulations on silver.
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It is hard to lose a friend. Congratulations on the silver!
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I'm sorry for your loss.. You did a wonderful job.. The emotion that you put into these five words were just so heartwrenching.. Congrats on the Silver..
Angel
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A beautiful expression of sadness, filled with griping pain and lasting memories.
Keep writing about this I find that it helps.
Congratulations on the silver.
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wow that is soo short but o sooo powerful! every word really counted!! wow!! good luck in the contest!
i am sorry to hear that bout ur friend! i am bookmarking this.
k can i add this to my page with the credit of you??
like it would be like this:
I miss you
Your memory remains, painfull unerased
utterly34exposed
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awwww
i am terribly sorry, i wish i could ease your pain but i cant, but i know people dont want you sad and miserable and your friend wouldnt either, try to cher up but rember your friend, just in a better happy way *hugs* im sorry if i hurt you by saying that
thanks so much for entering, hope things get better
stephanie
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