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To Infinity... and Beyond

She is everything
that spins, shines, pulsates
                  or explodes...

  He orbits the edge
  of her universe-
    falls within her groove~



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  • Pamela A Lamppa gold member
    July 6

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    I chuckled with that title and just had to come and read. This is a nice piece in brevity and it says everything one needs to know.

    Oh and I love this backgound. Oooh oooh AHHHH AHHHHH

    Great job with these 20 words. I did like this - very much. ~Pamela


  • Fire Storm
    July 1

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    divine sensuality

    your words express the love everyone deserves and seeks,the flipside of this is yours to carry on and pen from your heart and soul,,very well written,,,blessings of love,life,laughter and light...firestorm

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    July 1
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    That is a powerful love.

  • marlene47 silver member
    June 28

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    One of my favorite lines - your title. She's light galactic and he's in her orbit, in one of the grooves. Reminds me of a record - she's the disk and he's the sound.
    Marlene

  • sheltered
    June 28
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    Groovy

    The universal language of love.


  • Cerulean gold member
    June 27
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    I was expecting to read about Buzz Lightyear. heh

    Nice poem.


  • February Moon gold member
    June 27
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    I really enjoyed this.


  • KayJay46 gold member
    June 27
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    very nice...I like the title... you made me smile
    Ken

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