i seen you two days ago...
and when i walked into that house,
you stood there,
looking at me.
i ignored you and walked into the kitchen to talk to your sister.
but then when her and i were in the livingroom,
you popped in,
scaring the shit out of me.
and it was like old times.
you attacked me,
started tickeling me.
we laughed and argued and then finally stopped.
we sat there,
tangled in each others arms for about 5 minutes,
and then we started talking about how life is...
it was as if we didnt tell each other we were forbidden two weeks ago.
it hurts so much to love you,
as it hurts you to love me.
we both know we can be nothing more than friends,
and that is how it always must be.
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Comments
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Aww
This is so sad yet so typical. You really manage to tell the story of these two characters simply and yet very effectively . I could really relate to the feelings expressed here. One or two suggestions - the tense of the opening line should read I saw you... when her and I - would be she and I - tickling - didn't-
Thanks for sharing - keep up the good work.
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