Obsession

The pain, it's not receding.
My heart, I feel it bleeding.
Bleeding to much to let go,
But I can't let my love show.
This pain, it's over filling
My heart, Just keep spilling.
Overflowing, Cause I love you.
Even though, you have withdrew.
The pain, is still lingering
My heart, is diminishing
I've gotten used to it,

That much, I will admit.

The pain, the same.

My heart, part of your game!

Author notes

The pain, it's not receeding.
My heart, I feel it bleeding.

ok done!

A contest entry

A Fistful of Prompts by VoltaicHypnosis. 750 points, ended July 4, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Spell Check...Please!, My computer is silly, and for some reason it doesn't work.

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TyrannyForestFairy
July 10, 2008

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This poem is really good in the concept, I could feel what youre trying to say in this. I love the stucture and the rhyme flow. A few spelling errors within but the expression is still understood.Good job
live-laugh-love
July 8, 2008
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i'm glad u all liked it.
it was fun to write
it took some thought
(and by that i mean 2 days)
but once i re-started on it it flowed out!
Yesterdays Memory
July 8, 2008
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I loved it great write and thanx you for letting me enter
VoltaicHypnosis
July 4, 2008

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Wicked work here! I love what you've done with the prompt. I've had that, computers just refuse it sometimes... no typos, though your grammar could do with fine tuning in some places. I really enjoyed this poem, thankyou for the entry.
Princessdove
June 29, 2008

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Good write, heart felt, lots of emotion and feeling. Good job keep up the good work. Thanks for sharring this. Take care.