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Goodbye For A Bit

I have to say goodbye,
but only for a while.
I have to say goodbye,
but only for a bit.

I will be coming back,
I just don't know when.
I will be coming home,
I promise...

Don't ask me why,
why I have to go?
It isn't important,
it is just for a little...

Don't cry,
please don't cry,
I will come back...
... eventually ...

I need to say goodbye,
hopefully not for long.
I need to just say,
I love you.

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Wow, read 12:05 first...

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  • XXLilEmoDollXx
    August 3
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    wow, this is soooo sad...... gd job girl!


  • The Voice of Victory
    June 29

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    I have to say goodbye,
    but only for a while.
    I have to say goodbye,
    but only for a bit.

    I will be coming back,
    I just don't know when.
    I will be coming home,
    I promise...

    THATS THE KIND OF THING I SAID TO MY GIRL
    WHEN I WENT AWAY TO FIGHT.

    Great write!
    Keep it up.


  • VampireBrat
    June 29
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    this is awesome....
    I loved it.... very sad though!


  • B0b
    June 29
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    this is so awesome!!!


  • TheSilverQuill gold member
    June 29
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    oooh... very good... unfortuantely I didnt. A concious choice to - gettin on it now...


  • Sound of Madness
    June 27

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    AH ha! I see! The plot to the action movie thickens...ha ha lol. Na, this is different completely, but it gives 12:05 alot more meaning.

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