cumulus cloud drifts
appearing over maples
giant shows his face
Author notes
Prompt
I took the photo from my yard (will email or post wherever)
A contest entry
- A Fistful of Prompts by VoltaicHypnosis.
750 points, ended July 4, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I love constructive criticism
Comments
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!! Awesome!!

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A nice pen!
Short but full of imagery. I would like to see the picture.
Regards,
Jennifer
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I have only the free membership, so can't post it on this site. I can email or put in my author pic.
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Wonderful!
There is never a cloudy sky when I review your work James. Nicely done! best to you in the contest!!

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Thanks Pat
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