There once was a young lady named Fate
who had more than enough on her plate,
but when offered a hand,
stuck her head in the sand,
so missed the chance to meet her soul mate.
Author notes
Que Sera Sera!
Limerick syllable count 9,9,6,6,9.
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ROFLMAO!
This was BRILLIANT! Possibly one of the most memorable Limericks that I've ever read on this site; and I seem to have come across quite a few of those!
Ha, fantastic; well done yoU!
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Interesting, I thought this was a limerick!
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You are excellent in you word choices and form.
...What ever you will be will be.
must click you as a friend.
Sorry have little points to give.
Wanted to give more.
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Superb
'tis rather a cute limerick, which I really happen to like. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Again, well done. Obviously, this also reminds me of the old song: "Que Sera Sera",for those not familiar with it a link in a moment. -
Just Lol.
Erm, LOL. That actually made me Chuckle. I don't know much about Lymaricks but still I liked this one. Had a bit more meaning to it than most. This actually takes a bit of thinking about to understand. To me this is you questioning fate, and how you chose not to believe in it. But when confronted with the dielemma that fate may actually exsiste you chose to ignore it and you think you may have Missed an opetunity "To be Happy" =] Thats my interpration.
. Rewarded 8
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I love limericks. i can never write one but really enjoy reading them. This one is very well written and very cute. It also has a message within to everyone who reads. Great job! Thanks for sharing. it was a pleasing read
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Fate's fête
When ladies named Fate lose their sense
of direction at mankind's expense,
woman, kind, takes in hand
both the lie of the land
and the land of the 'why ?', 'whither ?', 'whence ?'
. Rewarded 4
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I liked this poem a great deal. They rhym, was so sweet and the message within the powm was so skillfully written. The background and the soft colours only add to how special your poem really is...
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Clever limerick! Well done my friend!
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