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Foxy Girl, My Foxy Girl

Foxy girl, my foxy girl.

Won't you be my lover?
Should I bite you, lick you,
Make you my own?

Foxy girl, my foxy girl.

Shall we play a little game?
I'll bind you, and blind you,
Shall I gag and entice you?

Foxy girl, my foxy girl.

Will you be my prisoner?
Moaning and screaming,
Pretty soon you'll be bleeding.

Foxy girl, my foxy girl.

Now shall we make love?
Slipping in, out, in, out,
Will you by my girl?

Foxy woman, my foxy woman.

You are no longer just a child.
I invaded your mind,
Now you are my woman.

Foxy woman, my foxy girl.

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  • LittleWolf14
    January 14
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    very good poem .... make more ;P


  • Ithica silver member
    July 2, 2008

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    This is a bit repetitive for my taste too... and the imagery was more descriptive than engaging... Like reading from a script before the actors actually personify the roles... Keep at it though!!! Ithica


  • zillion
    June 29, 2008
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    lol, this poem reminded me of Hnedrix's song "foxy Lady".


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 28, 2008
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    Well thanks.


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 27, 2008

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    Good..

    Interesting i like it alot. This was so describeing. Worded and so very well written. thanks for entering my contest. i wish you the best of luck.
    ..<3..
    Shelly

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