Power
between your legs,
shifting to a higher gear.
Wind travels through helmet visor.
Portray
vistas of black rolling mountains
covered with evergreens.
Natures beauty;
Ozarks.
Author notes
butterfly cinquian, syllable count 2,4,6,8,2,8,6,4,2
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XXXI by Arkbear.
500 points, ended June 30, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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great
I'll share that one with my husband, a bicycle rider.
I like the diamond shape the poem makes and the first part is about being on the bicycle and the second part about the surroundings.
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Hi, thanks for reading and commenting on this poem. cinquain butterfly poems are fun to do.
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You are an excellent writer.
I too love mo-bikes.
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I definately love writing poems using this form.
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Well Done
You had me with you, side by side cruisin` mountain roads. Thanks for the ride...Bob 42
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Thanks for reading and commenting. I truly appreciate it.
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Gosh....y'all are making this hard to find the perfect entry!
:)
Perfect count ~
Perfect aesthetics ~
Wonderful Flow ~
Beautiful Theme ~
This is why I love the Ozark Mountains...>>>>
Portray
vistas of black rolling mountains
covered with evergreens.
Natures beauty;
Ozarks.
So very nice....good luck & God bless you!
Bear ~
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Thank you for the bronze. I've done cinquains before but never a butterfly one. I'll have to do more. I have a brother who lives in Harrison, Ark. and have canoed the Buffalo River, trout fished below the dam on the White River, and boated and fished on the Bull Shoals Resevoir. Always love being in the Ozarks. Thanks again.
Ck
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