Don't come looking for me;;
I'll be right here with the words You spat at me.
ShatteredDreams&&Broken♥.The person I ♥ would never break me
down.
down.
down.
Not like this. You la--la--love me, right?
Oh baby, baby;; Into the looking glass I fall,
spiralling through the block.by.block cycles.
*Fairy_dust* you blew into my eyes to blind me,
Sweetie, you really screwed me over this time.
Blondehair&&blueeyes. You said I was perfect.
liar//liar.pants.on.fire. Oh love, I [almost]
hate You.
While we're discussing hate&&love babydoll,
Tellme.Tellme.Tellme. Ignore the tone of
desperation. It's not like I need You.
[liar//liar.pants.on.fire]
I'm crawling[retreating] into the corner now;;
the glitter will bring me up^, the vodka will
calm me down, making me so [almost] perfectly normal.
Babyy, I promise it's okie, leave me snivelling
with a syringe&&shot.glasses. Besides, it's time
to tell You, they'll give me more frills&&thrills
than you ever did or ever will again.
[liar//liar.pants.on.fire]
Author notes
Dirty Pretty ♥
liar liar pants on fire, refers to like a playground chant, if you were accused of lying, 'liar liar pants on fire' would be chanted at you. Gotta love school.
Hope this is okies [=
♥
A contest entry
- Dirty Pretty ♥ by Page Deleted..
425 points, ended July 11, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
♥
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love this, the stuttering la-la-love (L.A., L.A.) and the fantastic rhythm of this piece. Well done on the gold. ♥
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This is amazing. That's all I can think to say right now.
Thankyou for entering ♥
Keira
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awww it's beautiful sweetie & I can relate to this alot, as I know many people who fake emotions and they wont damn admit it, as they don't give a toss. btw, loving it sweetie and just hope you are having a good / okay day. x
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I have never understood the dirty pretty poetry!
someone will have to explain it to me sometime! So I can give a great comment. I can only say this did sound like a school yard argument.
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Oh baby, baby;; Into the looking glass I fall,
spiralling through the block.by.block cycles.
god, i can't even pick my favorite lines.
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ohhh my god this was amazing!!!
"I'm crawling[retreating] into the corner now;;
the glitter will bring me up^, the vodka will
calm me down, making me so [almost] perfectly normal."
absolutely perfect, good luck in the contest!!!
~HH
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"I'll be right here with the words You spat at me."
"*Fairy_dust* you blew into my eyes to blind me,
Sweetie, you really screwed me over this time"
"making me so [almost] perfectly normal"
LOVE those lines!!!
This is amazing. Seriously. I love how you incorporated so much into this while still making it so personal but relatable and...
gah, my English skills are lacking today. Sorry hun. I'll let the clappy men talk for me.
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Ahhh<3 This is def. one of myyy favvves :]]
"While we're discussing hate&&love babydoll,
Tellme.Tellme.Tellme. Ignore the tone of
desperation. It's not like I need You.
[liar//liar.pants.on.fire]"
Basically one of thee best stanzas/verses of this poem! well haha in my opinion ;]]] Absolutely la-la-loved it =) Which brings up another fave line(s):
"ShatteredDreams&& The person I ♥ would never break me
down.
down.
down.
Not like this. You la--la--love me, right?"
Wowww<3 How creative. Especially the "down.
down.
down."
& the
"You la--la--love me, right?"
=) <3
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