I really do hate no one
Love's all i can hold in
But deep with in my heart
Of wary porcelain
I find a harder, newer piece
Polished off with hate
It really stands so boldly out
From the others, ornate
yet it fits so well in there
like a puzzle piece
and when you try to cut it out
the glue will not release
So my heart of sturdy glass
Please oh please don't crack
cause then i'll have to pick them up
and put the pieces back
And when i look at every piece
The shining shards of glass
I would see my enemy
The mirror looking back
Author notes
Well i like this one a lot if you can't tell the word is enemy. i really liked this contest and i really like this poem thx much in advance
A contest entry
- great pieces that never got enough recognition by unraveled.
700 points, ended November 9, 2008, 35 entries
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Beautiful, This is a look at love in a pure form. We should never hate. We should love thoes as Jesus has loved us. Even our Enemies. God bless you and I am so glad I come by to read this one.
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This is really good girl! there's always that one piece in all of us
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excellent/the best i have felt!
i think this is one of your best writings!!! i really do. kinda' like me, together only in a million different peices. you know. don't you? i can tell you know what i'm talking about... i have mirrors in my house, but they are ALL covered with lace. so i DO understand. love gypsyfish
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