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Guarded Secret

I’ve got indescribable possibilities and emotions that I can’t admit
Here I hold a tainted microphone containing a guarded secret
But maybe I’m trying too hard to grasp for forgiveness
So I speak the words I promised myself I’d never speak.

If I live my life pushing what I want away
An ignorance and selfishness is all my eyes will portray
If I were to take a chance and open the doors of fate
An ignorance and selfishness in my eyes would finally be erased.

Surviving the worst, we give ourselves a pat on the back
Recovering the lost strength and getting our lives back on track
But maybe the strength we search for; is taking a step out into the  real  world
So I do the things I promised myself I’d never do.

If I live my life pushing what I want away
An ignorance and selfishness is all my eyes will portray
If I were to take a chance and open the doors of fate
An ignorance and selfishness in my eyes would finally be erased.

Fake a smile and walk away [ turn the torn pages on yesterday ]
I’m fighting to say what’s really been on my mind
You can say you know who I am [ but what no one seems to understand ]
I’ve hidden my true self;;
Just so I don’t end up hurt and let down...
Again.

In my hand I hold a tainted microphone containing a guarded secret...
[I’m  afraid .]

Author notes

6) Picture inspired
7) Emotions (basically anything on this anger,depression,heartbreak,humor,dark,etc.)
& kind of
1) lyrics (any genre you want...I'm not really picky about it)

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    October 6, 2008
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    I think most of us have a "tainted microphone" full of things we don't want to say or reveal

  • celadia
    July 12, 2008

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    I like the bit about the tainted microphone, the word use is inspired in that bit and I can think of several ways to use the tainted microphone image, watch out for stealers.


  • Kristin Melissa
    July 2, 2008
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    Koodles I LOVE this poem it's wonderful. Good Luck in the contest.
    Blessed be
    Mystic


  • she still smiles x gold member
    June 29, 2008

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    wonderfulll !

    LOVEEEE THIS. I could never take a picture like that and write something so beautiful and stunning, wtf! lol

    *Fake a smile and walk away [turn the torn pages on yesterday]
    I’m fighting to say what’s really been on my mind
    You can say you know who I am [but what no one seems to understand]
    I’ve hidden my true self;;
    Just so I don’t end up hurt and let down...
    Again.*

    Basically I'm in love with that whole entire verse right therrr. Need I say more? You alwayyys seem to be able to take whatever's on my mind and put it into perfect and powerful words. I hate you. For realz.


    Hahaha noo, you are my hoebuns, and I love ya dearly, even if you ARE a better and more fantabulous writer than muah . *sighs*

    <333


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 29, 2008

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    amazing i like the pic here too. this is very well written thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
    ..<3..
    Shelly


  • Eyes Wide Shut gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    you always write so beautifully.
    i'm jealous.
    yay you.
    good luck.

    love always,
    Austyn


  • LivinitupCutie
    June 27, 2008

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    I'm amazed of how it's all combined together and make such a beautiful piece...being denial and oblivious to everything around us just so there's nothing can hold us back...hiding away your true self just so you can't get hurt anymore then it's already is...this is indeed a beautiful written lyric..thank you for entering my contest

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