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Heaven?

Darkness engulfs me at every turn
Everywhere I go I stare into unseeing eyes
An apathetic audience watching my every move
Thinking nothing not judging not caring
Heaven , could this be it?

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AiM I AM

a friend of mine just got put into a group home for disabled youths as he has Downs Syndrome and it surprised me how happy he is there then it accord to me that being there, they're all the same so no one is judging him..thats my inspiration

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  • J Macabre gold member
    May 5
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    Sad that we have to go through life being judged by people who are really no better then we are.


  • righteousme
    June 29, 2008
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    not really my cup of tea... but thanks again...

  • righteousme
    June 27, 2008
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    great job... thank you so much for your time and talents...