Dark angel
I have sold my soul
for your cold flesh,
your cloying delights…
Love‘s a light
that doesn’t shine
in your presence…
In my weakness
I embrace the darkness
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: Bringer Of Death by *SAB687
30 words
A contest entry
- Quickie *2 ~ Dark...3 more entries please by Unsigned.
450 points, ended July 12, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Wow this certainly works for me..
Well done
Simon
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I have sold my soul
for your cold flesh
for your cloying delights.
That picture jumps off the page with those words. You did good.
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Ooh, 'I embrace the darkness'. Love that line! Well done.
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Our weaknesses sure can betray us at times!! Love this write.. the word cloying is an excellent choice in here.. love it!
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Ooh.. What a wonderful take on the prompt! I mean it's dark and yet it has this eenticing feel to it!! lol.. you did great!! I really love your take on the prompt.. Best of luck..
Angel
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Thanks Angel... I think we've all had those feelings and, if not... there's still time
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