Rain
I am drowning in the rain,
Everything i see remindes me of the rain,
Talking, walking and coughing is the rain,
My dreams of being with the rain,
Involve the shattered peices of my heart,
I walked, danced and laughed in the rain,
I even had my wost moments in the rain,
Hot and cold I loved the rain,
The memories of us will always be there,
The hood of the car we joined in the passion of falling rain,
Now as the rain falls everyday on my life i see us,
So with each single rain drop i view my shattered and broken heart falling to the ground,
And as i watch the rains drops falling i see the ending of our relationship,
To bad the rain fell on us!!
Author notes
Nichole
A contest entry
- Can you make me feel? (now open to PWs) by glitterydoom.
550 points, ended November 16, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I love the rain, it feels as though its washing away all your troubles, or thats what its like to me. I have lots of great memories in the rain, but also some bad ones too. Thankyou for enteing my contest and good luck
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