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fallen angel

What is this I find?
An angel in the boneyard,
sightless eyes that can see,
tombstones from the quarry,
skulls lying at her feet,
where i would hope to be.

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  • Unsigned gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    Nice...just seemed a little quick ans a little forced for me..

    Otherwise great

    Thanks

    Simon


  • KayJay
    June 27, 2008
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    Such a sad wish... but beautifully penned... Best of luck...
    Ken