The soul one sells while unaware,
the drugs makes the human where they dont care.
Eyes of stone unseen from within,
always takes of the soul at life's end.
Author notes
For as one falls deeper in a catatonic stae with eyes of stone and a heart filled with hate they often devour themselves along the way . The devils tea party
A contest entry
- Quickie *2 ~ Dark...3 more entries please by Unsigned.
450 points, ended July 12, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Pretty good even though the repeat of the word within in the last two lines spoils it a little for me
Nice anyway
Simon -
well done. wish you all the best in this competition.
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A wonderful take on the prompt... The message within your words is one that everyone should hear.. you did wonderfully.. I wish you the best of luck..
Angel
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Very smooth and full of emotion... a message that needs to be heard... best of luck...
Ken
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