If you see me losing face
Will you reassure me that I’m going to a better place?
If you see me losing ground
Will you tell me that life is just the beginning?
If you lowered me down under the sky of grey
Will your happiness be drowned by pain?
If I bared my heart to you
Will you understand how scared I really am?
If all you could see was my pain
Will you carry down the isle that final day?
If you wondered where I would go
Would you pray to The Lord to send me on my way?
what do you think?????
Comments
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This was such a raw, emotional peice, I feel the loneliness, the pain knawing-after reading your profile, I am amazed at your wonderful will to live, your passion to write and love. You will go places and know you are never alone, your father, step-father and grandfather are all watching over you, and they are smiling. You are a wonderful person, just keep going and recognize the fear for what it is, merely an illusion to disorient you, follow your heart and wisdom and most importantly "Jesus" (don't worry we're all trying to manage this, young and old alike-it takes time, patience and an open mind). God bless you!
Sincerely,
Knightangel
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Wonderful Poem
Good morning Nathan, This was such a heartfelt poem. I like how it was questioning but positive at the same time. A pleasure to read this morning. You take care.
Blessing,
Sandy
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AWW
this is such a sad piece nathan... your words were so deep with emotions and so pure, raw! the flow was great... and i love the way you end each stanza with a question! this was a pretty painful write, heat-breaking! your last stanza was breath taking... simply stunnin! LOVED IT!
keep writing kays, and SMILE ALWAYS!
love you,
Ranji
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