So broken and bleeding and ready to die...
Then you will fight
revenge for tonight
tracking and hunting down those who hurt you
killing and slaying is what you must do
pain is enthralling
so very appalling
nothing is left now, you have to move on...
You flesh a pure white
A devil of light
bleeding and screaming is nothing to you
murder and death is all that you do
you leave them crawling
why are you stalling......
your humanity's missing or so we thought...
memories cloud your vision
memories of pain
memories you thought you left behind
are now driving you insane
a mass murderer full of guilt
when you are not to blame...
Author notes
http://i215.photobucket.com/albums/cc266/no1ukno92/01bleeding_rose.jpg
my picture.
A contest entry
- What's Love But a Broken Heart and Suicide?? by GiftedPsychosis.
3500 points, ended July 7, 2008, 26 entries
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this is a very good poem it has real depth i really like how you write each of your poems strike me a differant way!!
--kat -
This one speaks to me in some way. I'm not really a good appraiser of poetry but I actually like this for some reason.
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dark
theres a lot of emotion behind this. makes you want to hear more. good job.
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