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Fallen Season

What happens
When fall doesn't start?
If September doesn't start...
Without September air,
Fall will be considered...
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season.

Author notes

I can't do much with 20 words, but I did my best!

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  • Lyndon gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    I am certain you did your best.
    You have a nice little tree there and a clever use of shape poetry.
    What is more, the poem sounds well when read aloud. So, you have the best of both worlds.
    Thank you. Lyndon of the Winklings.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    This made me smile and very very cleverly done with shape poetry form. I don't see enough of this on the site and am so pleased to see it here.

    Well done. Good job with brevity as well. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela


  • BluesMan gold member
    June 27, 2008
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    A very clever take on the prompt Nice graphic imagery