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The Fumes Of Carbon

The fumes of carbon,
Exit the mansions of man,
They rise up the sky,
Sooting all over and high,

Man created the comfort,
By the means of discomfort,

Boon for a generation of man,

Reduced the future life-span,

 

Rising the heat of the world,

Like a blanket of thick cloud,

The marine lost their comfort,

For man's selfish effort,

 

Tough the one who lives,

The life on earth today,

Threat of depleting ice,

Rising oceans and bay,

 

People on earth awake,

Spare the life on the earth,

Look around for God's sake,

Or Prepare to face the wrath,

 

Wake up from dreams of day,

Come answer the hour today,

Before the world see the D-day,

Come out, lets act, act today.

 

*~*Aun Ali*~*

{Lead by Example}

Author notes

The message to stop the rising pollution. Please take it seriously people it affect all of us. Man is dependant on nature for life and livelihood. Without iron-ore there is no plane and without forests there is no life. Who will sit on planes when the life on earth will end. Try to figure out. What had nature given you and what have you given back to nature. Human Beings are the most selfish creations, Are they? May be yes? If no then act, prevent the nature.

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  • Blue Rew silver member
    July 8, 2008

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    Excellent voice and wonderful rhyme.
    This one really speaks out to theme.
    Congrats on the gold recognition. Blue


    • Aun Ali
      July 8, 2008
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      Thanks for the beautiful comment, it matters to win gold in a poetry contest However it matters more when the message of a poem reaches far... my real success is still left.


  • Princess-nee
    July 7, 2008

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    Thanks for your entry.I appreciate your thoughts.This is one of the best writes.I really like the way you wrote it.Nice write


    • Aun Ali
      July 8, 2008
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      Entering your contest was a charm, to enter your first contest was a compassion, writing the poem was expression, to recieve your comment was fantastic and To Win The Gold at your hands is like a dream come true. Thanks dear sister, for this honour. I wish that you host many more contests in future, your life may give you fruits of your choice and success be there whereever you be. With lots of love.

      Aun Ali