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I love you says so much

My name melts on his tongue like rich dark chocolate "I love you." he says
Please. "You're a liar." I tell him, but only in my mind.
Outward, I smile and my eyes dance. "I love  you too, honey. See you later."
I hang up and go to the door, grabbing my bag on the way. I'm off to see the tall boy who smiled at me yesterday, while he will most definately spend the day with the girl from the coffee shop.

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  • zillion
    June 29, 2008

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    I think you mean 'Definitely' in the last line.

    Funny how we only say the truth in our minds.