My name is Rose
I'm 16 years old.
Been on AP for a year
No family is getting old.
I can be whoever to you,
A cousin, a sister, an aunt or a friend.
Really its your choice
I'll be here till the end.
You know what you want
I can tell,
I've seen how you write
And you do it very well.
So here, you have a choice
I'll let You pick my place.
Because in the grand scheme of things
It's all really up to fate.
Author notes
Well, i know we dont know each other very well, but i have been looking through your profile and your writes and i decided i would enter your contest.. it doesnt matter to me where i go, all i want is a family..
My screen name is SoftlyScreaming if you didnt know that already.
A contest entry
- ~~I'M Cleaning House~~ For AP Family Old....and what the hell New...I need it all so come on in by PassionsPromise.
950 points, ended July 2, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
its w/e
Comments
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Very nice, a great discriptive and heartfelt write.
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Hoodwink~
Oh My this is a Beauty of a piece and a strong Voice to show Your family support
Beautiful
Keep that quill dancing and You have also been Hoodwinked by The Poetic Bandits
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Hood Wink!
A sweet poem that is great to start a friendship and beginning of a family connection
If only the world was as kind as this
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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Yu have been HOOD WINKED by The Poetic Bandits. Nice to see you back and know you are feeling a bit better about things. We are a family on this site and when one of ours is down, we try to cheer them up. Nice HM you received for this poem. If you need a grandma, I am available. Have a great day.
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HOODWINKED
This is nice we all need a bit of family to let us know that we are loved and cared for best wishes always
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Hood-Winked!
I like this poem - it is very succinct and expresses your feelings well congratulations on the Honorable Mention - you deserved credit for this piece - I hope you have enjoyed being HoodWinked it was a pleasure to read your work
Keep writing
Polly
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HOOD~WINKED!!!
well written from the heart and to the point. the message is very clear. best wishes on your endeavor. you are very talented. keep writing! God bless you always
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Hoodwinked
Tory is the best. She is so very gifted. She is a loving person too. I have known her for over a year now. Congrats on your honorable mention. -
HOODWINKED!
Great rhyme in this piece. AP fams are so much fun!
- joanne
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HOODWINKED!
Wow... This is great. It was just so real and to the point. I fell in love with the last two lines.
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Hood Wink
I've seen how you write
And you do it very well.
So here, you have a choice
I'll let You pick my place.
Because in the grand scheme of things
It's all really up to fate.
I hope this works out well for you
Rick
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Hood-Winked!
Wonderfully written, very clear and to the point. Congratulations on the HM! it was well deserved. Keep on penning.
Bandit Elle -
I will take you as a daughter.
If thats okay with you.
Much love
Mom
Ps beautiful piece
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