Shattered hope
Unheard screams
tied with a rope
invaded dreams
Mommy won't you help me
I thought I was your little girl
Tell him to let me be, mommy
I feel like I'm about to hurl.
Mommy it hurts so bad
I can feel some tearing
Why is he so glad?
the pain is just so overbearing.
Mommy why did he flip me the other way
I thought this was the end
stuffs not suppose to go there,please go away
I don't think thats ever going to mend.
Is he done now mommy now that I'm covered with goo?
Why did you sit there and watch me, I know you seen me cry?
Why did you let him beat me black and blue?
Can't you see I am about to die?
It's o.k mommy I'm not mad at you
I know he forced you to to watch him
I know there was nothing you could do
but now I won't have to see that nasty grin.
Mommy I hope one day you can come see me
remember that place you said would keep me safe?
When that day comes we will both be free
Well this is goodbye,I love you mommy.
Author notes
So the little girl was abused as you can tell by her step-father and her mother wants to help but she can't. The girl knows this and dies knowing at least her mother loved her. I know it's sick but it happens alot more then we think.
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Wow. That almost made me cry. Good luck on the contest.
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oh dear... this almost made me cry!
i feel the pain in this write! it was truely deep and the emotions were so raw! it was just heart-breaking to read this! a truely stunning work of art! teared me up, do keep writing!
ooh, your rhyme just completed this piece perfectly!
much love,
Ranji
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this is really deep hun,
i love the imagery and realistic truth behind this,
its really deep and meaningful, it hit home alot,
all my love,
kitty xxx
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