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I live to see
the gray cat dozing
and new red roses

Renewal each morning when
I walk out the door to begin
the next step in my journey.

For freedom of thought, I live,
with a pencil;
sustained by sunsets

And kindness;
through dark, I pray,
survive for sunrise

I hope for progress
with pure appreciation
for its achievement

I live for people who need me
and some who claim to, merely;
still I want to be for myself.

I wait to dance in the air, figuratively;
reach towards song, and listen
for laughing, literally

Creativity, certainly; I wait for grandkids,
live for children, nephews, elderly,
the mentally ill

The impoverished, people to
whom I have nothing to give
and others who I try assist

I thrive on natural beauty,
sublime; cry a river when
opportunity appears denied

I've visions that may
or may not exist;
yet I wish

To show my gratitude for all that is,
with a love offering; 
joy talking modern ballet

Perfectly peaceful blue snowflakes,
gardenia flowers, opalescent moonstones
a smooth toned living ballad

Crooned in a soothing way;
live for heaven, earth and sea,
facets of humanity which
are always worth the wait.

Author notes

loosely based on the poem "I Am Waiting"
by Lawrence Ferlinghetti

http://www.geocities.com/SouthBeach/Canal/4016/waiting.html

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  • St. Poet
    June 30, 2008
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    Very good, ill have to take a look at that poem some time soon. good luck


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    June 28, 2008
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    Nice job. The imagery was great. I enjoyed reading.


  • Candy6
    June 27, 2008
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    cute

    Very nice write.



  • externalalias
    June 27, 2008

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    There's a level of imagery thats below this surface here, but its like a bubble! I daren't touch it (contemplate) it case it burst!
    Great work!


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    June 27, 2008
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    I wish you lived nexr door!

    This piece is perceptive beauty!!!

    Aesthete

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