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What he said to me...

This feeling is just borderline insanity
leaving me confused and weak
but i just can't be set free
since i don't want to leave.
It's all about the little things you say and the way that we speak.
In the late night hour i can still hear you say
"Baby I need you... I'm sorry... Don't leave yet... Okay?
But baby why do you do what you do when you know it ain't right anyways?
You don't even give me a chance to try to explain"!
When you  explain you take my heart
and you twist it around.
Till i can't tell the difference between the sky or the ground.
Malicious, decietful... your words are like poisoned sweet sprays
and you aim at my heart and this is what you will say,
"If we both love each other than why not do it", you say.
Than you make me feel guilty and then you turn and walk away
knowing i care you tend to play games
and i don't even see them till its almost too late.
And all that you do is just whisper and say
three little words that leave me so in a daze
and i tried to leave you alone because i am tired of feeling this pain
but "baby i love you" and there's nothing that i can say that will sway
because your words are so persuading that i eventually stay.
If only i couldn't hear you than i would persevere instead of be left in this dismay.

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  • zillion
    June 29, 2008

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    wow, this was hard to read because of the font color.

    " chance to try to explain"!"

    The '!' should be before the quotation marks.