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Sultry Amusement

Exhilarating motions
gliding smoothly
up...
      down
in...
      out
screaming release as it's driven home.

Adjusting my clothes
brushing fingers through my tousled hair,
breathing and heartbeat begins to slow.

Brazenly,  I turn to ride him again
climbing on gently, 
my body sways,
I could insatiably ride...
this *rollercoaster* all day!!



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2. Give 50 words on why roller coasters are a form of intimacy.

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    This is just wonderful!What a sensual 'rollerocaster' ride. Your innuendo is just fabulous! Very cleverly and skillfully penned indeed.
    Thanks so much for joining in our contest
    Gaylen


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      July 11, 2008
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      Thank you so much for Bronze. I had a blast doing this contest! Great prompts and alot of fun! I'm glad you enjoyed my take on it hehe


  • breedluv gold member
    July 10, 2008
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    Oh my.......


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    My goodness.. my mind was running all over the place then!!!

    I need to go on rollercoasters more I think!

    hehe.. awesome write!


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      June 27, 2008
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      Believe it or not, I've never ridden a rollercoaster in my life. I'm scared to death of heights, buttttttt I think I just might have to ride this one lol


  • darlintlc silver member
    June 27, 2008

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    LMAO!!! Very well done...now I know why I've always loved rollercoasters! lol

    good luck in the contest
    darlintlc


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    June 27, 2008

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    LOL ---This is excellent---I sincerely hope you don't become "Derailed"!!!
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!

    • Carolina Moon gold member
      June 27, 2008
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      LOL That might just be painful Thank you for reading and commenting.


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    June 27, 2008
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    Haha. It seems as though you have your muse back. Thanks for an exhilerating read.


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      June 27, 2008
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      Funny what it takes to inspire me huh? lol I'm glad you enjoyed reading and thanks for commenting.


  • KayJay
    June 27, 2008
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    LOL - what a great ride you've taken us on... Cleverly written and just plain fun...
    Ken


    • Carolina Moon gold member
      June 27, 2008
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      hehe I had fun with this one. Thank you for your nice comment, glad you got a laugh.

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