Left unguarded
Holding tight
Not letting go
Warmth in cravings
Sending me
Suffering in passion
Author notes
You can never get enough of hugs. Passion... something everyone would not mind suffering from. I'm sure this doesn't have that much impact. But feel free to critique. Thanks.
A contest entry
- Quickie Contest by Valley Girl.
300 points, ended June 27, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Cute and simple yet meaningful through the lines. Gorgeous concept, this was very pretty! Nice work!
I'm going to do what the piece is implying.....
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reciprocated
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I think you did a wonderful job creating this short piece. Sometimes, less is more.
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It's perfect.
I myself don't really go for love poems, but this is about love more than about being in love with a particular person. It's wording is excellent. My favorite line is the first actually. When you experience love, you are unguarded, at risk. Yet that is the only way to truly feel it. Very nice little piece. Connie
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its beautifuly done
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YAY HUGS! This is a very cute poem. Simple, short and sweet
~lae xo
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How true it is...hugs are somethiong that comforts us all...hard to live without them...best to you in this contest...
mystic
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A great description on hugs. You have done a great job describing the prompt. Thank you for entering, and best of luck in the contest.
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