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Release

We are a tangled mass of limbs you and I!
You kiss my neck, I bite yours
Oh the steam we create!

I undo your pants roughly making you moan.
You whisper sweet little tid bits in my ear.
Oh the noises you make!


Your pants go down boxers too. Until you
are a quivering naked being beneath my hands.
Oh how sweet you taste!

I bite your stomach playfully, making you yelp.
I lick your filling balls and hardening shaft.
Oh the pleas you make!

I thrust you deep into my mouth as far as I can go.
I make you moan and thrash about the bed.
Oh your hands in my hair!

I bring you to the point of coming.
Faster and faster I thrust you deeper and deeper.
Oh the rythme we make!

Then oh sweet one your release!
It nearly blows me away!

And I gulp down the sweetness
That you have gifted me.

Author notes

"Dirty Pretty ♥" I hope this is kinda what you want truth be told i looked at everything and was still confused, but this was too cool 2 pass up I had 2 give it a try!

yours always

~*~*~papercutangel86~*~*~

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  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    July 22, 2008
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    sometimes it is the gift to give that makes it all worth while! sexy little read indeed! good luck


  • sensualbutterfly
    July 22, 2008
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    Very sexy work. I loved it. Thank you for entering

  • thenorthernstar
    July 21, 2008
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    wow this is extremely sexy wow I'm impressed

  • cherrysmile
    July 8, 2008
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    luv this

  • Page Deleted.
    July 8, 2008

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    This poem is really hot

    To be honest, it wasn't exactly what I was looking for, but I did enjoy reading it and thankyou for taking the time to write for this contest.

    Keira
    --- blackwood.baby


  • Still single
    July 2, 2008

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    Sexy, hot, and good for the bloke, but where's the satisfaction for you??
    Well written Angel, i've got a contest i would like you to enter. http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2412365
    hope i get to read something else from you.

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