Eating my first love of chocolate
cherry filled fruit center,
chariots of the God's.
Riding Belmont parks roller coaster.
Fourth of July
intimate ride
ups and downs;
where I procured my fear of nuts,
discovered perils of dirty underwear
and learned fireworks
panic aliens!
Coasting down steep
alien up in front
fireworks EXPLODE in the night....
...now if you saw the size
of that aliens nuts,
both flying at me,
you would have been concerned
about his dirty underwear
attached to them, too.
Considering the size
of those skid marks.
Author notes
all seven prompts:
Okay, so here are your options.
1. Give us 50 words on the subject of how fruit is your god.
2. Give 50 words on why roller coasters are a form of intimacy.
3. Give us 50 words on why you have a fear of nuts.
4. Give us 50 words on the perils of dirty underwear.
5. Give us 50 to 100 words on you first love experience with chocolate.
6. Give us 50 to 100 words on why fireworks may panic aliens.
7. Give us 50 to 100 words on why you should be poetic emperor of the world.
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A contest entry
- Bring It On! by AliceinPoetryLand.
2000 points, ended July 11, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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LMAO! You certainly have lived up to the title of Poetic Emperor!
This is really clever and you have written a great entry using all the prompts and making them fit together so well
Thanks so much for joining in our contest
Gaylene
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lmao you had to do it stick that song in my head...skid marks on your boxers told a tale on you skid marks on your boxer said you done a .... some aliens are just so full of it....am thinking it could be a common-denominator amongst males but the reality of those nuts ... and that explosion of fireworks was not really fireworks after all you are talking aliens HH now when you set a match to gaseous body emissions it will burn with a blue flame and leave a scorch mark on your jocks but an alien now they could light up the sky, ever heard of a shooting star. You took this whole contest and had some fun...Excellent ...yep followed your lead with my comment am still LMAO
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Well brother! Ha Ha Ha..You fufilled the prompt!!.You and that sense of humour! You should win with this one..You are a real sport, I know, aliens, dirty underwear and all..If anyone can whip up a good poem for a laugh it is you...Gold for this one!
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Ewwww, that isn't a visaul I need. Dirty underwear and skidmarks they leave behind! Lol, your sense of humor is amazing here in this piece. Lotsa imagery for sure! Wow...is all I can say! ~Sie
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odd, but cool
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