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~ Soft Petals Of Blue~




Sheltered within your harbor,
drifting in soft pools of blue
dropping anchor in waters
of security, I am free to drift
within your tide.
I am safe from rocky storms,
found the freedom to spread my
sails.
Thriving in the simplicity of new
beginnings,
I am blessed to be caught within
the beautiful current of your love.




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15 poets
10- 20 lines
Prompt: "Love means trusting yourself to another, only to find your freedom in their love" ~Aisades

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  • Angelflower Greeters member
    June 29
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    Awww this was really wonderful!!! the image that you created was just so sweet!! and so loving.And the emotion was just intense with love.. You did such a wonderful job.. I greatly enjoyed reading this.. thank you very much for sharing!! best of luck..


    Angel

  • ShelleyA gold member
    June 29

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    A beautiful write. Heartfelt. Lovely depth of feeling. Very nice metaphor. Good flow and tone. Nice imagery. Good word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. Well penned and much enjoyed. Very good take on the prompt. Best wishes in the contest.

  • poet2angels silver member
    June 27

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    This is gorgeous!

    Such lovely words to make one sigh reading every line...
    Just so breathtaking!

    Lynda