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Life.

Missing image
~*~

On the road to death
I met you
and lived.


~*~

-Neha

27th June 08

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Ten words.

In a list

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  • Venugopal gold member
    July 16, 2008

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    Oh! Neha you are wonderful, everyone mets other in that road, so cute, I adore you dear


  • eyesofanangel524
    June 27, 2008

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    Wow..in ten words you have taken and given life to a beautiful picture. Amazed at how so little says so much. Best of luck to you in the contest


  • Noir mariposa...x gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Wow, for ten words you've mastered the picture ^^
    This is better than mine and I worked with ten lines!!


    Good luck with your entry!
    Claire x


  • james119
    June 27, 2008
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    ... remarkable poignancy in so few words.

    Impressive


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    June 27, 2008

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    Very beautiful and thought provoking. Quite amazing how meeting that someone special can make such a difference.
    The contest does say 10 LINES more or less. I guess you went with the much less option
    Thank you for your entry.
    Gaylene


    • Neha Sharma silver member
      June 27, 2008
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      Fine, I'll see if I can edit it.. or re-enter again.
      Thanks for the info.
      good wishes
      -Neha


    • Neha Sharma silver member
      June 27, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment. I read ten lines as ten words. does this dq's me?
      Good wishes
      -Neha

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