Solitude has trapped my soul.
A contest entry
- Tell me how you feel in Five words or Less by luna-midnight.
555 points, ended June 28, 2008, 80 entries
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Do you see the connection with the title?
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this is very good goodluck
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Well, the blades force me back into solitude.Ok, I'll be blunt.I cut myself to go numb to enter the domain of internal peace.Now I'm trapped in being numb and even more lonely than I was before.Hence the cage of solitude is made with razors.Thus trapping me in loneliness.
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i need you to put in your authors notes, the reasons for solitude what makes you feel this, and such?
so do that..
and then this is very sad, i know isolation and solitude too well, it can put such a damper and life and all, i hope you feel loved and not so alone soon
take care
stephanie
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