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Nature Rules

I'm falling over, as you can see,
The sand is hot and down on me.
Godammit! I need to pee.

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  • phoenixonfire
    July 4

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    lmao Thats certainly wasent expected! Absolutely outside the box! Well worded! Almost like a rap song!! Great one... Thanks for entering and good luck!

    pri
  • WritingWretch gold member
    June 28

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    Good point even Gods here nature's call.

    Many chuckles. Brings this contrived being of the prompt into the realm of natural experience far better than his nakedness. You have such a sardonic sense of humor. Love it. April. Return the favor?


  • PurringKitten
    June 27

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    lmao

    this is wonderful! spilt my coffee all over everything...so sreious and then wam!...thank you so much for the laugh, i needed that


  • Piccola gold member
    June 27

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    lmao. I guess the last line is my favorite. This is so realistic. Always a problem for me when my hands are full of laundry

    • quantumsurveyor
      June 29
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      Get someone else to do the laundry - all that contact with water makes you want to "go"!!
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