Lost inside an endless labyrinth.
Author notes
Being in debt.
In a list
A contest entry
- Tell me how you feel in Five words or Less by luna-midnight.
555 points, ended June 28, 81 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
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This was simple and a really nice use of a metaphor. Wonderful work mummy, I loved it!!
~Emily~ xx
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Definitely expresses the feeling of debt. There are ways to work it out - I did it - takes some major restructuring and changing how you view money. Congratulations on the HM.
Marlene
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oooouucchhiiee, that sounds awful *hugs* i wishi could help you, if you think there is anythin i can do to help please tell me.
thanks for entering and take care
stephanie
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Thank you, that is so kind but not to worry I'm optimistic that things will get better soon. Thank you for your kind thoughts.
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|Iknow, it is annoying
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we all feel that sometimes...
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