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Feeding Time


The sky filled with rockets
colorful blasts in escapade,
as the aliens check it out
not wanting others to invade

Waiting for the perfect moment
when our ripeness is complete,
the time of the final harvest
of the beings with toenailed feet

They watch and wait patiently,
for the feed



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Option 6 - why fireworks may panic aliens?

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    'of the beings with toenailed feet' Lol I love how you incorporated this line
    If those aliens want a feed we had better keep those fireworks going indefinatley
    Great entry. Thanks so much for joining in
    Gaylene