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A Picture in a Frame

Like a never ending Fairytale
  On the frames of the dance floor
    You lay my hand in yours, barely
      As your heartbeat shows the way

    Like the rain falling slowly down
  On the window, watching, waiting, as
You listen to my heartbeat, intently
  As your final breath escapes

      Like the four feet of a wild horse
    On the open field, perfectly as one
You softly pull me in, closer, reassuringly
  As a smile on my face is born

        Like one of the brave heroes
          On the pages of forgotten dreams
          You let go of your grip, slightly
        As you turn me back in time

    Like awakening in the morning
  On the softest linens of love
You take a bow, respectfully
As you let go of my hand

Like a never ending fairytale
  On the frames of our dance floor
      You and I will never forget, beauty
          As a Waltz

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  • Lady Eventide
    July 3, 2008

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    Oh, lovely. I love the layout, too, made me feel as if I were dancing. My favorite verses would have to be 4 and 5. All of this is magical, though. I guess dancing is like that. This poem reminds me of a dream, too. Well done!


  • Still single
    June 27, 2008
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    Very beautiful Daiz, i feel like you had fun writing this. thanks for the read.


    • Daizy21
      July 3, 2008
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      Listen I know this is random, but what the hell is your picture...is it an arm...and please tell me it is yours....and if so, please explain to me the "still single" part!

    • Daizy21
      June 27, 2008
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      Thanks for reading me sweety!