sunlight futilely
birds in own captivity
cage door stays open
myra
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Captured by Choice
Written February 21st, 2002
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Ah, Spacekake ... you always pinpoint the feeling ...
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Willingly staying a prisoner of your own mind is a bitter thing. Nice job.
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You said well, haikumonk; Birchwood ... thank you.
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fantastic, Myra .. it is difficult to leave the safety of our cage.
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the thought of any of us being in our own captivity is alarming..... yet not only a profound thought but also often a reality. That's what I fear...... someone locked in their own mind to never experience the 'freedom'. That is sad.
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Thanks Brain, Silver Angel & Kym ... good to know you.
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I feel it. And yes, I know just what you are trying to convey. Perfect.
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Very nice... the image is so clear and so is the message. :)
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Little birdie in an open cage .. yet she chooses to stay .. is it fear? Fly myra, fly from the cage and feel the air beneath your wings for we only live once. I once lived within the confines of a cage which I call my flesh .. fear kept me in a constant hellish state .. ahh to be free .. Much Respect, Brian
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Thank you, Poetic Friends ... but do you feel the pain? A poet sometimes yearns for someone to read the poem ... and the poet ...
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'birds in own captivity' Very clever irony. Very well done
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this is nice
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captured image and emotion...very moving!
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